话题很大众化，榜样，教育，成长，成功都可以！
As is shown above, in the middle of the first picture sit a father and his son, with father asking his son to work hard on the assignment while the father is watching TV himself. By contrast, in the middle of the other picture, the father is working with his son and setting a good model. If posted on the Weibo, this picture will draw a lot of attention because the words below the picture are really sparking and refreshing: being the model is better than giving the instruction.
如上所示，图画的中央坐着一位父亲和一个儿子。父亲让儿子好好努力做作业而自己却在看电视。另一张图画中，父亲在和儿子一起看书，为儿子树立了一个好榜样。如果这幅图贴在微博上，那么一定会引起人们的关注。因为配图的文字太有启发意义了：当榜样比给指令要强。
The picture demonstrates that nothing can be compared with setting an example when it comes to the cultivation of individual characteristics. To be sure, being the model of the child will help children gain fair returns, favorable positions or even fantastic feats in the future. (Put it another way, the absence of a good example will definitely lead to one’s poor performance and lower achievement.) Take Youyou Tu, the first Chinese Nobel laureate in natural science, for example. On the road to discover a cure for malaria, she has tried and failed countless times, but with the guidance of many senior scientists, she finally found the medicine and saved millions of lives. 图画向我们展示出，当谈及个人品质培养方面，没有什么能比树立榜样更重要。确实，为孩子做榜样能帮助孩子在未来获得公平和回报，有利的位置，甚至是辉煌的成就。（换句话讲，没有好的榜样一定为导致一个人不好的表现和更低的成就。）就以屠呦呦为例吧。她是中国第一位自然科学方面的诺奖获得者。在寻找疟疾的治疗方法之路上，她尝试了很多遍，也失败了很多词，但是在一些来科学家的指引下，她最终发现了治疗的药物并且拯救了百万记的生命。
The picture, to some degree, makes us reflect the conventional way of education. As we all know, the power of model will inspire us to transform our aspirations from a state of potentiality into one of reality. So, from my personal perspective, due attention to the change of education method should be attached by individuals and even the whole society.
从某种程度上这幅图画使我们去反思传统的教育方式。众所周知，榜样的力量会使我们将可能的想法变为现实。所以，在我看来，个人和社会都应该关注教育方法的转变。 （有没有喷这些句子，有那么几句就够了！）
这是从个人品质的话题入手写的一篇文章。
还可以接受的思路可以是这样的：
第二段：
1. 这幅图画展示了一种普遍的现象，教育中我们没有注意榜样的力量，这是很有害的。
2. 确实如果没有榜样，孩子的成功会很难。
4. 话句话讲，榜样在促进个人的成功，社会的进步。
3. 幸运的是大家也开始关注这一现象了。
4. 这是一个好的开始。
第三段：
1.应该加强意识，让大家都认识到榜样的重要性。
2.开展一系列的活动，专家想办法，改变人们的教育方式。
3.未来会很好。
这种思路也是很爽的！
你写教育方式不正确对学生会有害也是正确的。
你就写教育创新，模式创新转而再写创新重要也是可以的。