a)　 College　students　 now　are　primarily　interested　in　grades　and　economic　success.　They　are　 expected　to　cheat　on　exams　more　frequently.　This　is　not　like　those　who　 graduated　10　years　ago.　They　are　only　concerned　with　their　own　personal　 future.　They　consider　little　problems　of　society.　All　these　are　reported 　by　a　recent　study.
        
        　　b)　A　recent　study　reports　 that　college　 students　now　are　primarily　interested　in　grades　and　economic　success,　 that　they　are　expected　to　cheat　on　exams　more　frequently　than　those　who　 graduated　10　years　ago,　and　that　they　are　more　concerned　with　their　own　 personal　future　than　with　problems　of　society.
        
        　　不要总是以有生命的名词和人称代词开头(受汉语表达习惯的影响,不少考生部喜欢以I，People，We等开头)，如例10中的a）。
        
        　　例3
        
        　　a)　Many　people　think　birth　control　is　quite　necessary　in　China.
        
        　　b)　It　is　widely　(commonly)　thought/believed/held/accepted)　that　birth　control　is　quite　necessary　in　China.
        a)　More　and　more　people　agree　(realize/are　aware)　that　women　should　enjoy　full　equality　with　men.
        
        　　b)　There　is　a　growing　agreement　(realization/awareness)　that　women　should　enjoy　full　equality　with　men.
        
        　　a)　Many　Chinese　people　have　gone　to　the　United　States　in　the　past　15　years.
        
        　　b)　The　past　15　years　have　brought　many　Chinese　people　to　the　United　States.
        
        　　a)　We　almost　forget　this　event.
        
        　　b)　This　event　is　now　almost　fading　from　our　memory.
        
        　　a)　Students　should　certainly　make　continuous　efforts.　　　　
        
        　　b)　Continuous　efforts　on　the　part　of　students　are　certainly　required.
        
        　　a)　We　easily　drew　the　conclusion　through　the　investigation.
        
        　　b)　The　investigation　easily　led　us　to　the　conclusion.
        
        　　不要千篇一律地使用主动态(英语中被动结构的使用频率远高于汉语),如例11中的a）。
        
        　　例4
        
        　　a)　We　are　making　great　efforts　to　improve　our　English.
        
        　　b)　Great　efforts　are　being　made　to　improve　our　English.
        
        　　a)　We　know　very　little　about　the　nature　of　human　beings.
        
        　　b)　Little　is　known　about　the　nature　of　human　beings.
        
        　　a)　Because　of　social　demands,　there　appear　many　evening　schools.
        
        　　b)　Many　evening　schools　are　called　into　existence　by　social　demands.
        
        　　a)　We　may　think　more　of　the　elderly　who　live　apart　from　their　children.
        
        　　b)　More　thought　may　be　given　to　the　elderly　who　live　apart　from　their　children.
        
        　　不要总是用(如果),(因为),(当)等口语意味较重的句子,如例12中的a);　要注意使用书面语体的句子,　如例12中的b).