I.The description of the drawing
1.A runner dashing to the finishingline.
2.He is overjoyed at the final victory.
3.“Starting Point” right on the near track.
II.Interpreting its meaning
1.What‘s the author’s intention?
2.There is no end for one to make progress.
III.Supporting examples
1.The example of the discovery of the gene.
2.The safe return of Shenzhou V spaceship.
3.The personal example of ourselves.
Conclusion:be well-prepared for a new starting.有了这样一个提纲来组织思路,我们就不愁写不出精彩的英语文章来。
5.组织成文根据上述英语提纲,我们就可以写出一片有血有肉的文章来。经过修改整理,最后可以形成如下的文字:
Stopping for a NewStart
From the drawing we may see a runner who is dashing to the finishing line,dripping with sweat all over the forehead.Apparently,he is overjoyed at the final victory of the race after a long running.Right on the sports track nearby,there are two huge Chinese characters which read“STARTING POINT”。
What does the author of the drawing try to reveal to us?Judging from the title“Finishing Line Leads to Another Starting Point”,we know the artist‘s intention:he tries to indicate that there is no end on the way of making progress.
This drawing reminds me a lot of phenomena in the world.The most obvious example is the discovery of gene,which is the final solution to the mystery of the life.On the other hand,it is a staring point that triggers off the study of cloning.An other example is the safe return of Shenzhou V spaceship,which marks the triumphant end of the launch.At the same time,it begins a new era for China‘s space exploration.A third example,something about ourselves.Four years’college life is now approaching to the end and each of us is going to stand at a new starting point,either as a postgraduate or a member of the society.In this sense,we are stopping for a news tart.Only when we are well-prepared for it,can we meet the challenge in the future and be the winner of the new era.
