Topic72：你是否同意学分将有助于学生更好的学习？
Topic72 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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Many people in the world share a belief that grades make students work hard. I agree with the above statement because I believe that high grades are more helpful in getting a bright future.
One of benefits of the high grade is that it promotes a learner's interest. Interest is the best motivation to encourage students to learn. If a learner has a good score in English, he will find that English is a beautiful language. For example I love to learn math, because it brings me happiness when I get a high score in a math exam. When I went to university, I select mach as my major.
The second reason is that schools give us a chance to learn knowledge, why not try our best to get it. In our lives these knowledge has important effect on our mind which need be wise by an by. In addition, self-credit may be instruct by good marks. It is also important to our life.
A further solid argument for the high grade is that it means a good future career. Many companies would rather hire students who are with high grades.
As far as I am concerned, I come to the notion that there are main reasons why I support that grades encourage students to learn. Firstly, high scores spring learner' interests. Secondly, students get self-credit through it. Furthermore, A good job may wait these students who have high marks.
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In many schools, teachers evaluate students by their grades. Many people think that it is unfair and one-sided to evaluate students by grades and will discourage students to learn. I believe, however, grades encourage students to learn. The reasons can be analyzed as follows.
To begin with, using grades as standard to evaluate students can give students stress of learning. No stress, no motivity. In order to get high grades, students must study hard. They must read more books, do their homework carefully. Stress makes them learn more knowledge. Stress of grades simultaneously force and encourage students to learn.
Grades can encourage students to compete with each other. The modern society is full of competition. Students can learn the concept of competition through grades. At the same time, they can learn the spirit of competition. To compete with others and obtain good evaluation, students must learn many techniques and get high grades. Competing grades in schools can make students more adaptable to the society.
Grades can also give students the feeling of success. When they get high grades through hard work, students may think that they make a great achievement. The feeling of success will encourage students to study harder and harder. At the same time, the successes in schools encourage students to find chances to succeed in society.
From the above analyses, it is not difficult to get the conclusion that grades encourage students to learn. Grades give students the stress and make them compete with each other so that they must study and work hard to succeed.
