TOEFL考试作文常见错误简析(2)

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  标点问题来源:考

  I love animals. and I like to help them. because they are helpless. so I want to become a vet.

  这是一个非常普遍的问题!许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号,尤其是当他们用手写的时候。

  重复冗余来源:考

  Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.

  一种意思的表述不止一次,或者某个词语不必要。

  单数/复数来源:考

  Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.

  单词需要从单数变为复数,或者由复数变成单数。

  单数可数名词来源:考

  单数可数名词不能单独使用,应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词(a, the, my, his, her, Gary's, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。

  拼写错误

  主语、动词或宾语有问题来源:考

  I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it.

  There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.

  句子的基本结构有问题  缺少主语、动词或宾语,或者这些成分重复。

  语气与文章不符来源:考

  I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me.

  I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.

  语气与文章其他部分不相符 可能是过于正式或者太不正式。

  代词指代不明来源:考

  If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication.

  I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.

  代词所指代的指示词(介词所代替的名词)不清楚。

  过于笼统来源:考

  We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.

   句子或它所表达的意思过于笼统,不能提供多少信息。

  动词时态错误来源:考

  Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.

  动词时态不正确 检查一下是应该用现在时、过去时、将来时还是完成时等等。

  选词不恰当来源:考

  I was late getting home because I lost my way.

  在这种情况下不应该使用该词 可选择更好的词语或者所使用的词语与文章的总体语气不符。

  单词形式不当来源:考

  I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.

  所使用的单词的形式不正确 检查一下应该使用该词的名词、形容词或副词形式的哪一种。

  用词错误来源:考

  Even I don’t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store.

  I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.

  用词错误或在此种情况下该词不是最佳用词。


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