四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。例如：
        1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
        Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
        2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
        Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
        3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
        Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
        4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
        Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
        
        五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。例如：
        1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
        Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.
        2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
        Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.