名师指导高分写作策略(3)

考研 Freekaoyan.com/2008-04-06

  (竞选学生会主席演讲稿)

  A Campaign Speech

  1. 你认为自己具备什么条件(能力、性格、爱好)可以胜任学生会主席工作。

  2. 如果当选,你将会为本校同学做什么?

  Good evening, Ladies and Gentlemen:

  Thank you for coming to this election campaign today. With the trust and complete support of my team, I am delighted to announce that I am running for chairman of the Student Union.

  As a diligent man with pleasant personality, I have been always considered to be a good team member. Meanwhile, as a big fan of sports I fully realize the importance of teamwork and advocate the spirit of being quicker and stronger. I possess strong determination to take firm steps toward achieving the objectives of my team. In addition, my working experience with the Student Union in the past two years will be extremely helpful to my future work here if I get elected.

  A sign of a really strong organization is that it can change its leadership without hindering its progress and without damaging its values. If I am elected, I believe I have the capability to lead the Union to advance in the right direction. I will cooperate well with my fellow members of the Union and take innovative measures, including establishing a student-information center, forming a teacher-student-friendship association, to make the Union a true assistance to students’ study and life here as well as a bridge of communication between teachers and students.

  Thank you very much for your attention.

  (导游介绍)

  A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction

  1.Your role: a tour guide

  2.Your audience: a group of foreign tourists

  3.Your introduction should include: some welcoming words; the schedule for the day; a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)

  You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.

  Good morning, ladies and gentleman, welcome to Beijing. Now, I would like to introduce myself: My Name is Li Ming, a tourist guide from China Travel Service and it’s great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day. I wish all of you enjoy yourselves during this trip.

  Here is the schedule of the day. The first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient China. The next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the best-preserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than one thousand years ago. In the afternoon, we will go for the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient emperors.

  Currently we are on the way to the Great Wall. Dating back to the seven century B.C., the Great Wall is constructed by respective states for fortifying against invasion of neighboring states. By the reasons of long history and its length, it becomes one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdom and crafts. From the top of the Great Wall, we can enjoy a magnificent view of continuous mountains, green trees and blooming wild flowers. It is no doubt that one says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”。

  This is my introduction to the Great Wall. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.

  (交通事故见证书)

  An Eye-witness Account of a Traffic Accident

  1. 车祸发生的时间及地点

  2. 你所见到的车祸情况

  3. 你对车祸原因的分析

  Yesterday afternoon, I happened to witness a terrible traffic accident on my way home from school. It was 5:30 p.m., I was riding back home. When I got to the last crossing on the Century Street, the red light was on. So I applied the brakes, along with a long queue of vehicles waiting to pass.

  Just at that moment, a private car of Accord with earth roared forward at my side and bumped against the heavy-load truck traveling eastbound. As a result, the car was badly damaged and its driver got fatally injured on the head.

  As for the cause of the accident, I think the driver of the car should be held responsible: the light was red then; he should have stopped and waited. It was he who had broken the traffic regulations. In addition, the bad weather was part of the cause. It was drizzling then, and the road was quite slippery. Finally, drunk driving was probably an important factor. As the police discovered on the spot, there was a heavy alcoholic smell on the injured body of the car driver.

  三、文章写作步骤

  (一)看清题目

  大学英语四级写作可分为两类,第一类题目需要以讨论形式作答,你需要讲出正反两方的论点和你自己的立场。你可设想这是一场辩论比赛,但你要为两方发言。你要写出足够的证据支持你的论点和反驳对立的论点。 第二类题目需要以报告形式作答。你需要根据题目描述某现象和发掘此现象产生的原因、对个人和社会带来的影响并提出解决问题的方法。虽然你并不需要支持正/反一方的论点,但你应在真实的处境上提出真实的证据。

  (二)思考答案

  当你计划你的答案时,你应能想到2个或以上的主意支持你的论点。你可在一张纸上写下你脑中浮现的文字和主意。你先不用理会写下的是否有用,当你写好后可将题目也写在纸上,然后在围绕题目的地方将所写下的文字分门别类。在这一阶段,你可删除无用的文字或句子。在第一类问题上,你应至少想到2个或2个以上的支持论据,而在第二类问题上,你也应至少想到2个或以上可供讨论的话题,但无论是回答哪一类问题,你不应该写超过4个论据或话题,否则,由于字数的限制,你的文章会变得太空泛。

  (三)组织答案

  你或许没有时间完整地写出你的计划,但你必须在心里组织和安排好你的答案。你需认清题目的要求和找出题目中想问的问题。开头段要用来表达文章的大意,如果写的是一篇议论文,笔者的观点可以在这里表达出来。主体段通常包含2个或2个以上论据并有较充分的展开,主体是文章的核心,是成败的关键。结论是全文的归纳和总结。

  (四)撰写答案

  在一篇120字以上的文章中,介绍和结尾段各占15%,主题段占70%。切记写作尽量少犯语法错误,观点要鲜明,层次要清晰。 当计划好后,你便可以开始作答。

  (五)检查答案

  检查答案是写作的最后一道防线,许多错误,尤其是语法错误,可以在此得以纠正,这也是写作得高分不可缺少的一个重要过程。在写作考试时,学生至少要留出2到3分钟检查自己写作的内容。


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