Section Ⅳ Writing

　　说明：此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，就不须改动，如有错误，则按下列情况改正：

　　1、此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。2、缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在右边横线上写出该加的词。3、错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边的横线上写出改正的词。

　　注意：原行没有错误的不要改。

　　A boy doesn't become man at the same age at  76 77 

everywhere in the world. Many people in America   

felt that a boy becomes a man when he is  78 

eighteen, it is different for an Eskimo boy. 79 

　　An Eskimo boy becomes a man since he kills  80 

his first polar bear. The polar bear, that may be  81 

nine feet long and weights 1,000 pounds, is a  82 

very dangerous animal. To kill one take a great  83 

deal of courage and skill. The boy who can kill   

a polar bear developed the skills and courage that  84 85 

needed to be a hunter-and a   

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Directions:

　　Suppose you want to sell your electric cooker. Write a postcard to put in your local (当地的，局部的) shop window (假定你打算卖掉家里的电烧锅，试写一便条贴在附近商店告示栏上)。