2016考研英语:高分作文之咨询信

本站小编 文都教育/2015-04-16

 很多考生可能都有过这样的困惑,为什么有些人的英语作文就能写得那么“任性”,挥洒自如还能屡获高分,从今天开始,老师就为你一一讲解几大书信的写作方法,让你也能轻轻松松写出“任性”作文!

  咨询是对自己需要的信息进行询问,这种咨询可以是一种申请和请求。

  咨询信是对收信人提出请求、进行询问,希望对方满足该要求。写咨询信重点要写清楚为什么要咨询,请求他人做某事的原因。写信时首先要说明写作意图,注意语气要礼貌,用词要规范;然后具体展开说明咨询的原因;最后表示希望对方予以答复。

  咨询信的写作策略:介绍自己、提出请求——说明原因及其他事项——表达谢意、期盼答复。

  由于提出的咨询往往都是需要麻烦别人的事情,所以要注意语气的礼貌程度,不要吝啬你的感谢。

  【相关真题】

  Directions:

  You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.

  Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)

  【考场9分范文】

  Dear Sir or Madam,

  Moved by the noble cause of Hope Project and encouraged by what has been achieved so far, I would like to contribute my bit to the project by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area of your province.

  I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out a girl who has just started schooling but whose family cannot afford her education. My plan is to pay for her tuition on an annual basis till she finishes her secondary education. I would like to remit my donation directly to a bank account opened by her family in her local area.

  I am looking forward to your prompt attention to this letter.

Yours truly,

Li Ming

  【试题分析】

  本题目是写一封信给负责希望工程的相关部门,表达如下信息:(1)说明你有意资助一名偏远地区的儿童;(2)要求收信方帮助物色对象;(3)具体说明你想资助什么样的儿童;(4)具体说明你资助的方式,包括资助的时间、形式、金额等。

  从语域的角度讲,这是一封要求别人帮助的请求信,因此语气要严肃、礼貌,不要因为自己准备慷慨解囊就一副盛气凌人、屈尊就下的口气。首先应表达 自己对希望工程的理解和支持,然后说明自己的想法,明确资助的对象以及自己资助的计划等。整封信可分为三部分写:第一部分写资助意愿,第二部分具体明确资 助对象和形式,第三部分为结语。由于收信方没有明确是谁,因此可用Dear Sir or Madam作为称呼。

  【咨询信开头常用句式和套话】

  I am very eager to receive information about…

  I am writing for information about…

  It would be grateful if you could furnish us with the information about…

  【咨询信结尾常用句式和套话】

  Your earliest reply would be mostly appreciated.

  Your immediate response is enthusiastically expected.

  I would highly appreciate your prompt reply.

  英语作文是典型的慢工出细活,日积月累,方能有成。祝各位考生能够按照自己的计划踏踏实实走好每一步,坚持不懈地到达理想的彼岸。


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