二.经典范文赏析
The problem of smoking has been widely discussed all over the world. As is shown in the pictures, smokers make up 20% of the worlds total population. And tobacco has caused a loss of 200 billions dollars and claimed 3 million lives annually.
However, it is encouraging that the world tobacco production has dropped from that of 14.364 billion pounds in 1994 to that of 14.2 billion pounds in 1995. According to this change, I am confident that there will be less and less tobacco consumption in the future, generally for two reasons. On the one hand, more and more people are aware of the great harm of smoking and join in the fight against it. On the other hand, many governments have attached more attention to this social hazard and have taken many measures to put an end to it. The most obvious example is the ban of tobacco advertisement on mass media in some countries. Therefore, I have every reason to believe that the fight against smoking will be won at last.
译文
全世界都在广泛地讨论吸烟问题。在图表中我们可以看到，烟民人数已占到了世界总人口的20%。每年由吸烟带来的经济损失已经达到2000亿美元，有300万人由于吸烟失去了宝贵的生命。
但是，我们欣喜地看到世界烟草总产量已由1994年的143.64亿磅下降到1995年的142亿磅。根据这一变化，我确信将来烟草消费会逐年下降，原因有两个。一方面，越来越多的人认识到吸烟的危害性，并且加入到了反对吸烟的战役中。另一方面，许多国家都更加重视吸烟问题，并且采取了很多措施来禁止。最明显的例子就是一些国家禁止在大众媒体上做烟草的广告。因此，我有理由相信最终我们一定能够打赢反对吸烟的战役。
黄金句型
The problem of ... has been widely discussed all over the world.
……问题正在全世界范围内广泛讨论。
As is shown in the pictures,...
如图所示……
However, it is encouraging that...
但，……让人感到欣慰。
According to ..., I am confident that...
根据……我非常确信……
On one hand... on the other hand...
一方面……，另一方面……
The most obvious example is
最明显的例子就是……
Therefore, I have every reason to believe that
因此，我有理由相信……
