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祝贺信1
结构要点:
祝贺信是由于某种原因向收信人道贺的信件，一般包含三个部分：
1． 点明要祝贺的事情，并向对方道贺；
2． 详述祝贺的事情；
3． 再次祝贺。
Directions 11
Suppose your friend Ellen is going to graduate from Fudan University and get a Masters Degree. Write a letter in about 100 words to congratulate her. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using Li Ming instead.
Sample:
Dear Ellen,
How delighted I am when I hear that you are going to graduate from Fudan University and get a Master’s Degree! Though I cannot go to Shanghai to join in the celebration of your graduation owing to the long distance between the two cities, yet I wish to express my most earnest and ardent congratulations through this letter.
For years you have made unremitting efforts in your specialized field and your diligence and intelligence at last win you honor. I am not only happy for but also proud of you from the bottom of my heart.
I believe as an upandcoming person, you will use your head and hands to develop your career to a higher level after the graduation.
May you achieve greater success in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
祝贺信2
语言注意点:
祝贺信除了向对方道贺以外，还可表达祝福、期望等。语言应热情洋溢，满怀喜悦。
Directions 12
Suppose your friend Mr. Zhao has recently got a promotion. Write a letter in about 100 words to congratulate him. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using Li Ming instead.
Sample:
Dear Mr. Zhao,
I am extremely glad to hear that you have got a promotion in your company. Congratulations!
It is excellent of you to get a promotion, for after all you have just been in the company for six months. As we all know, you are always a both hardworking and creative person, which is essential to achieve your goals in work. Moreover, your strong sense of responsibility enables you to win trust from people around you and thus win yourself various opportunities. I think that is why you can make achievements in such a short time.
There is no doubt that you deserve the promotion. Having you as a friend, I really feel both proud and lucky because I can often learn so much from you.
Best wishes.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
邀请信1
结构要点:
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信，包含三个方面：
1． 邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间和地点；
2． 与该活动有关的注意事项；
3． 期待对方接受邀请，并可表示感谢。
Directions 13
Write a letter to one of your high school classmates who is in a nearby city, and invite him/her to your city at this weekend. Some necessary details must be included. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Sample:
Dear Linda,
We haven’t seen each other for six years after graduation. I am so glad to hear that you have graduated from UCLA and come back to work in Suzhou. If you are free this Saturday, please come to Shanghai and have a good time with me.
We can first go to the Century Park, where the flowers are all in blossom. Let’s go boating on the lake —isn’t it pleasant in the cool breeze? Then I will treat you to dinner at a western restaurant on Huaihai Road—it is small but really nice—I’m sure you will enjoy it. After dinner, let’s go to a concert—you are a music lover, aren’t you?
If you couldn’t come, please notify me before Friday. If you can, please tell me which train you will take and I will meet you at the railway station.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
邀请信2
语言注意点:
邀请信叙事一定要清楚、明白。如写给朋友，可选用活泼、真诚的言辞；如写给长辈、上级、名人等，则语言应正式、礼貌。
Directions 14
Write a letter to invite a famous professor to give a lecture to the English postgraduate students in your university. Some necessary details must be included. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Sample:
Dear Professor Michael Hutchison,
We are very glad to hear that you are attending an international conference in Beijing. We are writing this letter to inquiry the possibility of inviting you to deliver a lecture on American literature for our postgraduate students on the evening of June 16.
We have long been noticed that you have done a lot of substantial and creative work in this field. Two of your books have become textbooks for our students for several years. So all of us believe your lecture will benefit our students and teaching staff alike.
If you can manage to come, please tell us the number of your flight and we will meet you at the airport. If you can’t make it, please also let us know.
We are looking forward to your coming.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
投诉信1
结构要点:
投诉信是对产品或服务表示不满的信件，一般分三个部分：
1． 提出投诉内容；
2． 说明具体情况；
3． 提出解决办法。
Directions 15
Suppose that you ordered a television but later found that it has worrying problems. Write a letter of complaint to describe the matter and require settlement. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Sample:
Dear Sir,
The television I ordered from your store arrived on time last Friday, but only three days later I found it could not work properly.
On Tuesday evening, when I turned on the television, I was surprised to find that it became a blackandwhite television—all of the other colors were simply gone. What made matters worse, the remote control was also out of order. I dialed your service number for several times, but the line was always busy.
This problem has affected our normal life. Can you get it repaired as soon as possible? Thank you for your consideration.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
投诉信2
语言注意点:
投诉信应重点表明投诉的原因，叙事应客观、准确、简洁。最后提出的解决方法应切实可行。在表达自己的不满时，语言要把握分寸，不失风度。
Directions 16
Write a letter to complain about an unhappy experience in about 100 words to describe the matter and ask for the mistake to be corrected. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Sample:
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you about a most unhappy experience. Last Tuesday morning, we took a longroute bus of your company from Dukou to Lijiang. The bus was scheduled to arrive in Lijiang at 7 o’clock in the evening, but it stopped midway at four p.m. for mechanical problems. The driver and the ticket seller could neither solve the problem by themselves nor seek help from others.
Where we stopped was nowhere near a village. Up until 8 o’clock, another bus finally carried us to a shabby rural motel. We had to pay for our accommodation. The room was too small and the quilt was so dirty. To our surprise, when we just managed to sleep at around 2 a.m., the driver came to wake us up—the bus had been fixed!
I suggest that you look into this matter immediately and deal with it quickly and properly.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
询问信1
结构要点:
询问信是希望获取信息的信件，分为三个部分：
1． 说明自己的计划或目的，也就是询问信息的原因；
2． 征询具体信息；
3． 期待回复并表示感谢。
Directions 17
Write a letter inquiring about a hotel. Some necessary details must be included. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Sample:
Dear Mr. Guo,
I am going to visit Songpan on July 30 and wish to stay at your hotel. My friend has just come back and warmly recommended it to me.
My wife and I want to go horse trekking with the Happy Trails Horse Team. We will choose to go to the Ice Mountain, so it will take four days. We want a double room with a private bath for two nights, July 30 and August 3.
Would you please tell us whether we could have such a room and how much it will cost us?
I am looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
询问信2
语言注意点:
询问信应语言简洁、清晰，无歧义。语气礼貌、恳切。
Directions 18
You are a tourist and you want to experience a new way of traveling. Write a letter inquiring about such a traveling program. Some necessary details must be included. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Sample:
Dear Mr. Guo Chang,
My wife and I have read in the traveling book Lonely Planet about your Happy Trails Horse Team. We are very much interested in going horse trekking with your team.
We want to choose the Ice Mountain route, which will take four days, from July 31 to August 3. What should we take with us? Will the guides provide accommodation for us? How much will the tour cost each of us?
We will reach Songpan on the afternoon of July 30 at about 5 o’clock. I hope it will not be too late when we arrive at your team.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
介绍信1
结构要点:
介绍信是向收信人介绍某人的信件，包含三个部分：
1． 说明被介绍人的身份；
2． 提出希望收信人做的事情；
3． 如果是请收信人关照被介绍人，表示感谢；如果是请收信人与被介绍人共同工作，则对合作表示乐观。
Directions 19
Suppose that your friend is going to stay at a big city. Write a letter in about 100 words to introduce her to a friend there. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Sample:
Dear Linda,
I want to introduce to you the bearer of this letter, Helen Herbert, who is a diligent and intelligent scholar just like you. She will attend an international conference on economics from August 27 through August 30 at the ShangriLa Hotel of your city.
She will have no problem with her accommodation. I am sure a talk will benefit both of you a lot. I have given your mobile phone number to her, and I hope it will not cause any inconvenience for you.
Thank you for your kindness and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
介绍信2
语言注意点:
介绍信应措辞礼貌得体，对被介绍人的说明应简洁明了、重点突出。
Directions 20
Write a letter to inform a colleague of a coming visiting scholar in about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Sample:
Dear Anna,
Please allow me to take this opportunity to introduce a visiting scholar, George Martin, from University of California at Berkeley. He will be a member of our Program of AsiaPacific Economy for nine months.
George is an enthusiastic and enterprising scholar. He has done various researches on American and Asian economies for more than ten years. I am sure that his participation will do a lot of help to our recent research.
George will be arriving here on next Friday and he will soon go to visit you after arrival. You can introduce the overall development of our program to him, and then explore the details of cooperation.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
