胡敏写作经典范文20篇及其指导第四集

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but perhaps more intelligent.

To improve the system of college entrance exams, I suggest the following steps: the exam papers should be graded to take into account the different levels of ability and the different backgrounds of the applicants; in addition to the actual exam, a complete assessment of the applicant's educational achievements should be made; and tutoring in examination techniques should be made available to all.

The man to remember
背诵14
Perhaps the most interesting person I have ever met is an Italian professor of philosophy who teaches at the University of Pisa. Although I last met this man eight years ago, I have not forgotten his special qualities.

First of all, I was impressed from the beginning by his devotion to teaching. Because his lectures were always well=prepared and clearly delivered, students always swarmed into his classroom. His followers also appreciated the fact that he believed in what he taught and that he was always stimulating. (引人入胜的)Furthermore he could be counted on in every class session to explain his ideas in an imaginative way, introducing such aids to student understanding as oil paintings, phonograph records, pieces of sculpture, and guest lecturers. Once he even sang a song in class in order to illustrate a point.

Second, I admired the fact that he would confer with students outside of the classroom or talk with them on the telephone. Drinking coffee in the snack bar, he would easily make friends with students. Sometimes he would challenge a student to join with him a game of chess. At other times, he would quite readily join groups to discuss subjects ranging from astronomy to scuba diving. Many young people visited him in his office for academic advice; others came to his home for social evenings.

Finally, I was impressed and attracted by his lively wit. He believed that no class hour is a success unless the students and the professor share several chuckles and at least one loud laugh. Through his sense of humor, he made learning much more enjoyable and lasting. If it is true that life makes a wise man smile and a foolish man cry, then my friend is truly a wise man. Probably the best example of his wit is this idea with which he once ended a lecture : ”It is as dangerous for man to model himself up on his invention, the machine, as it would be for God to model himself upon His invention. ” 背诵14

重视语言的表达(实质性的涨分)

There is a growing concern over the students who do not put too much emphasis on study. Some students always idle away their time(消磨时光), playing cards, drinking, gambling. These problems are really serious. Taking into account all these factors, we can safely come to the conclusion that the students will waste more time if they do not make good use of it.

As a student, busy as I am with my study, I also do many interesting things such as reading novels, writing articles at the two-day weekend. All work no play makes Jack a dull boy(只工作不玩耍,聪明的孩子也变傻). It is really true!这些词句就像沙漠中的金子,所谓的金子无非是语言的variety。所谓语言漂亮是指语言的变化。

1词的变化:
使:make
a) This society still makes women unable to enjoy equal rights.
b) Women are still denied equal rights.
a) The incident made me recall one of my past experiences.
b) The incident reminded me of one of my past experiences.

不仅……而且:not only…but also
a) The factors for a rise in teenage smoking is no only social but also psychological.
b) The factors for a rise in teenage smoking are psychological as well as social.
a) Taking a part-time job cannot only earn a little money, but also have an opportunity to contact with society.
b) Taking a part-time job means more than a little money you can earn. It also means an opportunity to contact with society.
a) Old people go to park not only to do exercise but also to make friends.
b) Old people go to park as much for companionship as for exercise.

人们认为:people think
越来越:more and more
a) More and more students find learning English has become more and more difficult.
b) Students in growing numbers find learning has become increasingly difficult.

a) More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.
b) Teenage smoking is on the rise in recent years.

a) More and more teachers are demanded with the development of economy.
b) There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.

大多数:most
a) Most students take a part-time job after class.
b) The vast majority of students take a part-time job after class.

a) Most people take part in sports of different kinds.
b) The considerable proportion of people takes part in sports of different kinds.

a) Most college students take a negative attitude towards smoking.
b) The large percentage of college population take a negative attitude towards smoking.

2 句型的变化
A variety of reasons have led me to choose this occupation over other more lucrative ones. First, teaching is learning. To make my lectures more interesting, I have to read more books, explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world—the very thing I like to do in my life. Second, teaching means freedom. As a teacher, I can freely express my opinions and explain them in my own way since nobody will interfere with me. Finally, I like teaching because it offers a certain peace of mind. No more rushing to catching a morning bus, no more anxiety to please a boss, and no more worries about being laid off because you are getting old.
如何使作文的时态简单化,以最大程度地避免错误?
参加国际上的任何一场考试,只要是写英语作文,主体上应该是一般现在时态;只有当你提 到具体的、过去的、某一事件段发生的具体的某一件事情作为例证时,可以一般过去时。中 心时态是简单的一般现在时。
图画作文
以下四篇背诵文章解决该类题型:
第一:对图画进行描述:第二:透过画面点出图画的寓意;第三:发表议论、提出问题方法和建议。
P102 Exercise 7
Fill in the blanks with appropriate words.
(背诵第一篇)
As is shown in the pictures, (From the pictures, we can see clear that) with the increase of commercial fishing, the number of fishes dramatically decreased. In one picture, there were various kinds of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. On the contrary, in 1995 there was only one fish, with many fishing-boats.
The purpose of this picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decline of ocean resources. Owing to overfishing the number of fishes has obviously dropped. If we let this situation go/continue as it is, we do not know where fish will be in the future. By that time, our environment will suffer a great destruction.
Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. For one thing, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing. For another, we should enhance the awareness of people that the ocean resources are very vital to us. Only in this way can we protect our ocean resources. Also I believe that we humans can overcome this difficulty, and we will have a brighter future.
P25 范文十
Directions:沙进我退,我进沙退
A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in about 200 words.
B. Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET Ⅱ.
C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:
1. Describe the cartoon(对图画进行描述) and the message conveyed(透过画面点出图画的寓意)
2. Draw a conclusion and give your comment on the cartoon.(发表议论、提出问题方法和建议)
(背诵2)
From the pictures, we can see clearly the relationship between people and the deserts. In the first picture, people are fleeing from greedy/hungry sandhills because they cut down all the trees. The caption reads: As the sand advances, we retreat. In the second picture, the people have returned carrying tools, water and young trees to plant the land again. The caption reads: As we advance, the sand retreats.(描述)
It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about the importance of trees in water and soil conservation, and the need for everyone to fight against the danger of desertification. In fact, what he is saying is if we do not fight against the sandhills, the sandhiills will drive us away from the land. (In fact, what he is saying is that the sandhills will drive us away from the land if we do not fight against them.) If we let this situation go as it is, our environment will suffer a great destruction. (寓意)
The best way to fight back against the greedy desert is made clear in the second picture. There the local people are actively setting about the task of planting trees to reclaim the land and make it(代词的使用) fertile. The fact that(同位语)there are three people in the picture each with a different job(逻辑独立主谓结构,介词短语表示动态概念), suggest that (事实说明)working together is the key to success in the battle against soil erosion.(措施、建议)
P23:范文八
隐形杀手
Directions:
A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in about 200 words.
B. Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET Ⅱ.
C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:
1. Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed
2. Draw a conclusion and give your comment on the cartoon
背诵3
Pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world. As is shown in the cartoon, two cars are giving off waste gas and three people are trying to avoid breathing in the poisonous gas by masking their face with their hands. The poisonous gas sent off by factories, domestic appliances and automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people to breathe.(对图画进行描述)
There is no denying that automobiles are indications of civilization, progress and development; nevertheless, automobiles cause the serious problem of air pollution. Scientists have warned that unless effective measures are taken, the problem of pollution will eventually get out of hand. Actually, people are showing a real concern over the problem. For example, there is an increasingly loud voice from the public(公众)for firm action against pollution from automobiles.(寓意 )
Indeed, the earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our descendants. In my opinion, we should work out concrete solutions to the problem of pollution from poisonous gas given off by automobiles. For example, the automobiles should be equipped with a device which can dispose of waste gas so as to prevent it from polluting air. Only in this way can we really solve the problem of air pollution caused by automobiles.(措施、建议)背诵3
P24 范文九
尸销会
Directions:
A. Write an essay that conveys the information in the following chart/graph/picture/drawing/cartoon accompanied by your comments.
B. Time limit: 40 minutes
C. Word limit: no less than 150 words
D. Your essay should be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET.
背诵4
This picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard, and being shocked at the message. This is because the billboard is advertising a "Sale of Dead Bodies." The cartoon is a criticism of the careless use of simplified characters.
Obviously, the advertiser wants to inform people of the sale of something else-not dead bodies! But we don't know what it is, because the three characters which make up the message are used incorrectly. Nowadays too many people not only do not take enough care to write properly, they even invent their own simplified ways of writing.Simplifying the old, complicated characters has been a great benefit, enabling people to learn to read and write quickly.
But we should stick to the standard simplified characters, make sure that we use them properly, and definitely not make up our own simplified characters. Otherwise, what was intended to make communication easier could result in making it more difficult.
背诵4
图画+提纲+场景
P7 2001年写作考题评分标准及样卷
76. Directions:


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