Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it.（不是重心,不能展开 ）
There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to
1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,（描述，寓意）
2) 2) give a specific example, and（举例）
3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. You should write about（建议措施）
200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
Sample 1（235词15句）
背诵5
(Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest.) 删除,败笔，机械抄袭命题语言Love is of the utmost importance to us humans. Everybody not only needs love, but also should give others love.
As can be seen in the picture, "love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places." This is indeed true. People in darker places need more light than other people. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to help them step out of their difficulties.I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following examples.(Numerous examples can be given easily, but these will suffice For instance when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may save his(her) life. Again, when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish school and change her life. In these circumstances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed.
To sum up, we should offer our help to all the needed. We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others. So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, don't hesitate to give your love to him (her). I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and our society will be a better place for us to live in. (20分)
背诵5
Sample 2
背诵6
It is generally believed that love is a hot topic which is most talked about.（意思重复，但是给人的印象很好）= > Love is one of our /the favorite topic today. This is true not only in China but also in other countries. We live in different countries and speak different languages, but love is something common to us all. The picture tell us a simple truth: love is like a lamp which shines brightest in dark places.
Love is most valuable when it is most needed. For example, once I saw a foreign lady get lost in the street. She could not speak Chinese and nobody seemed to be able to help her. Though my English is not very good and I am a shy person, I thought she needed help desperately(绝望地). I asked her what she wanted. She told me she lost her way, so I showed he r the way to her hotel. It was a small thing but she thanked me very much/a lot because my help was needed greatly. Therefore, My help was like a lamp in a dark place. But how to show love may be different with different people in different countries. This is something we should give more thought to（more thoughts should be given to the way to show love√）.
I think we all should be like a lamp in a dark place, showing our love, giving our help to others, even to strangers. In this way we can make this world a harmonious and peaceful world.(18分)
9个句子242单词 加深两点认识：老师写的，全是复杂句子
1．文章趋势是复杂句子，基本上拿不到高分。
2．全是简单句子，也不行。
*考试，考英语面掌握的宽度。句型多变化
2001年作文范文
背诵7
When we use the word "love" we do not simply mean an attraction to a person of the opposite sex, which is a very narrow definition of the word. The picture below illustrates the real meaning of love, by stressing the fact that love is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes.
In fact, throughout history people of many different cultures have regarded love as the noblest of human emotions. As an example of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year. Although their incomes are still low by international standard s, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can-be it money or goods-to help their needy fellow citizens. Moreover, they do this with not hought of gain for themselves.
In my opinion, the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. In this way, we can help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.
图表作文
粗线条；原因，没点拓展一下；措施建议
99年 作文 (三)评卷实例
Directions:
A. Study the following graphs carefully and write an essay in at least 150 words .
B. Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET Ⅱ.
C. Your essay should cover these three points:
1. effect of the country's growing human population on its wildlife（描述图表，想
大于现状，粗线条的描写）
2. possible reason for the effect
3. your suggestion for wildlife protection
样卷1. 得分14 15句话
背诵8
From these graphs, we can draw a conclusion that, with the growth of human population, the number of species has decreased rapidly in America, and some species have even vanished from our planet.
Why does this phenomenon appear? I think there are several possible reasons for this. First, with a rapid growth of population (as the human population expands) , more and more people came to(逐渐开始) live where some wild species have been living. Then these species have to move to other places. Some of them probably cannot adapt to the new environment and die. Second, although many people look on the wildlife as their friends, some people may not think so. They catch a lot of wild animals and sell them in order to get more money. Third, with the development of industry, the natural balance and the ecological environment are destroyed. The deforestation(采伐森林) has become more and more serious. So(锁定这一段)some of the wild lives become homeless and extinct.
In order to protect the wildlife, I have some suggestions. First, the governments should make laws to prevent them from being caught and killed. Second, the governments should educate people to love nature and protect it. Third, as for ourselves, we should take practical actions to protect our living environment.
P18 范文三老师写的
在写一些文章时，不可避免的会有一些核心概念，避免重复。
①人口增长 野生动物 灭绝 构成威胁
THE UPS AND DOWNS OF POPULATION GROWTH
背诵9
The two charts show that the ①increase in the U.S. population has been accompanied by a corresponding decline in the number of wildlife species. Far too many species have been lost already. This poses a danger to the ecological balance.
As the ②human population expands, more and more wild animals are hunted for food, or because they are thought to present a threat to man. But studies show that one of the primary causes of the disappearance of wildlife is pollution, which is one of the consequences of ③population growth and economic development. This makes us wonder if man is able to share this planet in harmony with other life forms.
In my opinion, it is imperative(迫切的) to take steps to reverse the disturbing(令人困惑的) trend illustrated in the charts. One measure would be to forbid the building of cities in areas where wild life is threatened with extinction. But, more importantly, man must learn to stop polluting the environment, or he himself will become extinct.
背诵9
举例时，有两种方式：
1．举几个例子，每个例子都是高度浓缩，高度的提炼。
2．举一个例子，把这个例子细化。
最后要有一个主题句，在后面锁定段落
范文十一
Statistics in People's Daily Expenses in Xi'an
Year Item 1995 1996 1997 1998 1999
Food 66% 61% 48% 41% 36%
Clothing 9% 10% 12% 15% 18%
Recreation 4% 5% 8% 9% 11%
Others 21% 24% 32% 35% 35%
Total 100% 100% 100% 100% 100%
背诵10
What is shown in the table above indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in the people's daily expenses in Xi'an from 1995 to 1999. The expenses on food have declined by 30% while those on clothing and recreation have increased respectively by 9% and 7%. The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely related to one another.
There are two factors accounting for these changes. Development in economy is an essential one in the five years. The increased income resulting from economic growth plays an important part in the less expense on food. Hence, a small percentage of total income is enough to cover food expense. Another one is the changes in life style. When food presents no worry to the average, people begin to focus more of interest on handsome appearance and happy leisure time. As a result of such a shift, spending on clothing and recreation increases year after year.
From the analyses made above, we may come to the conclusion that people's living standards in Xi'an have been constantly improved between 1995 and 1999. With the further growth in economy and more changes in life style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the better direction.
提纲：（这篇题没给）
1．描述图表，现状
2．原因
3．预测未来
图表作文的变体
A.Write an essay that conveys the information in the following chart/graph/p icture/drawing/cartoon accompanied by your comments.(1 信息〈具体的描述〉 2 对信息的看法)
B.Time limit
C.Word limit
写法：第一段依然是粗线条的描述
第二段进行深入细致的描述*图表语言*
第三段发表个人的评论
第1种 分析背后的原因
第2种 对图表的发展趋势，发表个人的看法
第3种 一般性的评论（原因、趋势）
1．这种提醒考的是科研能力。 要会观察现象、看数据，会分析里面的规律性的东西
2．考论证的能力。 观点是来自数据、图表本身；规律性的东西——观点；数举行的东
西——论证支持。
3．图表本身暗示者作者的立场。
4．一切的一切来源于图表。
考科研能力；考语言能力。
P15 范文一
最新大纲样题（2001年）：情景+提纲+图表*图表语言*
Directions:
Widespread tobacco consumption has led to grave consequences, yet the tobacco companies still claim that they make a valuable contribution to the world economy. There is a discussion in a newspaper on the above two viewpoints. Write an essay to the newspaper
1) criticizing their view and
2) justify your stand.
In your essay, make full use of the information provided in the pictures printed below. You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
把图看懂，图的导向是什么，以此明确你的立场。
背诵11
The majority of people would agree that cigarette smoking has caused serious problems. But the tobacco companies insist that they contribute greatly to the world economy by paying taxes to the government and employing hundreds of workers.（当他的情景部分是两个观点，而图表本身又暗示了一个观点，在第一段要点击对方的观点，但是绝对不展开。也不要写的太长。）
Personally, I believe that cigarette production and consumption threatens to do more harm than good. Firstly, smoking is responsible for（是造成什么原因） many fatal diseases such as lung cancer, heart diseases and so on. According to the survey, tobacco consumers account for about 20% of the world population, and among them, three mill ion people die from smoking-related diseases every year. The fact that the output of tobacco production is reduced from 143.64 billion pounds in 1994 to 142 billion pounds in 1995 also suggests that people have come to realize the negative effects of smoking. Secondly, tobacco consumption is extremely wasteful of money. As is indicated in the pictures, 200 billion US dollars is lost due to smoking each year. Obviously, the total loss of money around the globe substantially exceeds(大大超过) the gain in the industry.（*全部来源于数据*仅是描述） 表层结构写出来，思考就生成观点。数据就变成论证。（不能这么写）
特殊要求：图表语言
In conclusion, as the economic development aims at making our life better, we cannot sacrifice our health for short-term financial benefits. If we have to spend more and more money providing medical services for those who
